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Review:LittleMissPrincess says:
YES YES YES YES YES I LOVED IT! I WANT MOAR PLESS!

EDLIVER FTW.

im actually really happy that they ALMOST kissed, of course the fact that someone took their picture makes everything seem so much juicier, and HAH HAH ROSE also edie and oliver are just SOOO cute!

i expected a bit more about ada, and why she kept coming with oliver to that restaurant. she's his sister, but maybe you could include a bit backstory ples for your lovely reviewers :D

umm, yeah SO YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON OR OTHERWISE I WILL ACTUALLY CREYS.

but i really love this chapter actually so much, also i like all of your chapter titles, you clever little writer (:

Author's Response: Oyez, Ada is definitley coming back! I didn't include any back story because of a pretty big reason and I wish I could give more of an explanation but I JUST CANT OKAY

:3

I'm glad you like the title! It was "Tongue-Tied" because I was litening to that song by Grouplove as I wrote it, but 1: I don't like naming chapters after songs, 2: It felt a little too cliche.

The next chapter is pretty much written! I'm just going back and doing some tweaking :D

♥!


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