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Review:Jessica D says:
Okay.. Here we go.

I really love the banner for this story, it was partial reason I clicked on it. I loved the sunglasses on her.

Second reason was that I had no idea what it was about, since the quote doesn't reveal much, which is a good and bad thing. It's a good thing because some people are into that. I am exhibit a. It's a bad thing because some people aren't into that.

I think that some parts were a bit eh, like Lily's POV. But overall, I'm excited to see what happens next. I think that Lana is a very strong character.

But I'm still not exactly sure what the story is about, to be honest. I hope you get more into that next chapter.

I'm a huge fan of angst (IE self-harm, anorexia, bulimia), so I'm also excited to see where that takes the story. Lana just seems so unlike most cutters, so I like that.

Different is good.

Anyway, I just love that banner!

-Jessica

Author's Response: Hey there!

I know, the banner's AHMAZING, that's all decoded. @tda. I literally owe her my first child for that lol. I'll be sure to pass ur compliment on:)

I know that the quote doesn't reveal too much, but I was going for mystery with that, so it looks like it worked out.

And yes i know, Lily's was a total flop, but it was necessary for plot development:( I had so much trouble with it that I just wrote down whatever, it was so frustrating.

And don't worry, more will come soon! This first chappie was kind of just an introduction, and then I'll get more into things.

Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for this review! It made me smile so much:D

xox, miluv



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