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Review:potterfan310 says:
I'm glad most of her friends know.
I really can't wait for her parents. It'll be interesting how they treat Ava, will they disown her?, will they be angry?

I'm really excited for James' reaction since A) He's the daddy and B) From the looks of it, he'll be the last to know at this rate.

Where stop one scene and end another, perhaps add a page break or a few stars ** to idicate a new scene instead of just a big gap.

Perhaps few more descriptions of what the characters look like or where they are.

Can't wait until the next one :)
Soph x

Author's Response: Oooh, I'm excited for her parents' reaction too ;D

I don't usually do this, but I was planning to put up a few chapters then go over and edit them - going over things that might not make sense and putting stars or something between paragraphs.

I think I might put in a few descriptions later on ... but I'm not sure. We'll see :)

Thanks for the review!xxx

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