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Review:TheHouseElf says:
Hey Jami, here with another review!

Again, I loved the beginning of this chapter! The short scenes with Lily just epitomises how she's crumbling inside, the descriptions, yet again, as glorious as ever. I also liked the yearning Lily has for her sister, the yearning for an older family member to tell her 'everything will be alright', it truly is heartbreaking to read.

Oh my, Mrs Potter is a crafty one, isn't she! Wow, pudding works every time, doesn't it just? I love the mother/son relationship her and James have going on, its really cuddly, fuzzy and warm, it's great :P I also liked the Marauders relationship beginning to be developed, the silent communication. And the mention of the Longbottoms! Ah, doesn't everyone just love the Longbottoms!

Oh, that Violet is quite self-absorbed, isn't she? She seems like a character that isn't evil, just a little conceited :P I have a feeling we'll see more of her and her arrogance...

I loved the Jily going on, the comforting- of course it's sad that Lily's parents are dead, but hey, it means Jily! I liked Lily's resolution at the end, her determination to be okay. It just seems so in character, otherwise she wouldn't be a Gryffindor would she?

Another great chappie Jami :D

Author's Response: Hi there! Sorry for taking so long on this response :(. Family just came into town Friday night, and they're killing me. Haha. I'm going to be at work tomorrow though (thank god) and can't wait to finally have time to read another of your chapters!

You're completely correct about Violet. She's not evil at all, she's just a sixteen year old girl who's a bit too full of herself and likes to cause drama. I'm sure we all know one of those ourselves :P

I'm so happy you liked that it ended with a bit of her determination. Exactly like you said, that's what makes her a Gryffindor!

Thank you so much for your awesome reviews ♥ sorry again for the response wait time :(. But I love being able to read through them again ♥

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