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Review:AlexFan says:
That quote still applies to this chapter! You've got a few grammatical errors in this chapter that could be easily fixed but nothing major. I would suggest using compound words to make the writing flow a lot smoother. Like writing "I'm" instead of "I am."

I don't know why but the writing always sounds robotic to me whenever I see stuff like that.

I'm guessing that Ruby's pregnant and she's having one of those mood swings that I hear pregnant women have. Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter!

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! Im glad you liked the chapter =)

ohh! i try to change tht but sometimes im just like eh whatever haha

well we will see :P

thanks for the swap!

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