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Review:AlexFan says:
I'm sorry but that was the most adorable thing ever. I just sat and smiled like a complete idiot throughout this entire thing. I thought it was really sweet though.

Anyway, the only CC that I have is that you switched POVs in the chapter which I'm assuming was on purpose but if it wasn't then you might want to watch out for that.

I love how Albus just assumes that something's wrong with Ruby just because she's asleep when she usually isn't.

There is one quote from Harry Potter that just about sums this chapter up:

"Oh to be young and in love."

Author's Response: awww haha im really glad you liked it!

i think the POV change was on purpose but I might be wrong so let me go recheck tht haha.

thanks for the swap!


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