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Review:annabelle says:
i really like it from albus' view and he is quite a cute character...
i miss sirius though we have not heard from him in ages...
im a bit confused though im not sure what just happened...
i did like the part with snape in though that was quite funny .
pls get next chapter up soon :D

Author's Response: I like writing him. He's adorable to write in my eyes and a nice change from James.
I'm sorry I haven't wrote him in a while. He was just two chapters ago though. Haha
Sirius doesn't have anything going on at the moment - or nothing I can write about. But he'll be in the next chapter more. It might not be his point of view, but he will have a bigger role. We didn't see him in this one and I almost brought him in for a little bit, but I couldn't work it in there.
Are you confused by the ending? I might need to revise it a little. I mean it's another unfortunate cliffhanger, but it's not supposed to be too confusing...well just a little. Basically if you got that the Centaurs attacked, but Al was saved by something or someone - you're good. :) If you didn't get that - not to worry! I'm going on a massive revising spree soon and it'll hopefully be fixed in the process. ;)

I'm glad that you thought the Snape scene was funny. I've had that written for a while - almost as long as Al's sorting - and I've been itching for a chance to pop it in somewhere. xD

The next chapter will be a little while. Break is over for me and I have to actually study for a bit. But it will hopefully be up by the end of the week - or beginning of next week. Just be patient for a bit and I promise there will be updates as soon as I can get them out. :)

Thank you for the review!

Taz

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