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Review:Rosie says:
This is an excellent story. It made me have all the feels!

Seriously, great story, great story line, and very well written.

My only suggestion for the story itself would be that, perhaps instead of Fleur "drilling the phrase" into his head, you could strengthen the backstory a smidgen. Maybe make it a phrase Bill learned on his own (maybe with the help of her mother or her sister) specifically for their wedding day.

I liked the bit about Fleur cutting his hair--that made me smile.

One small grammar note: "The Nurses, who been born into years of peace, tried to soothe their residents best they could." It's a little awkward. I'd suggest rewording it to something like "The Nurses, who had been born into years of peace, tried to soothe their residents best they could." or, a more aggressive change, "The Nurses, who were born in the years of peace [and didn't understand the pervasive fear from the days of Voldemort] tried their best to soothe the residents."

This was really lovely. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely review! I really appreciate these great suggestions, it would definitely make sense if Bill learned the phrase on his own, I just may go back and change that around a little, so thanks :D it's great to get feedback as it can only make the story better!

I'm so thrilled you liked the story, your kind and helpful comments are really appreciated :)

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