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Review:FriendofMolly says:
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I bet after the Disaster on the Pitch, every Auror will know the counter curse for Fiendfyre. I would love to know just what happened to the Lestranges. Just for throwing the Killing curse they should be in the deepest hole in Azkaban. At least you gave us some very nice snippets. You are the first who had Remus's father in the story. I have seen his Mum, but never the father. Sweet 1st birthday party. Last, it wasn't a big surprise that Ginny got an invitation from Gwenog. Though it was a very cool way for it to arrive. I don't think that action scenes aren't necessarily your strong suit, just don't try to put too much in. Keep it simple.
FoM

Author's Response: Yeah, and surely they'll teach Harry and Ron how to do it straight away! Yes, and the Lestranges are wanted for other reasons too - they can look forward to spending the rest of their lives in Azkaban.

I'm glad you liked the birthday party. I actually have a whole background story about Remus' family, but I'll save that for another story.

No, I guess it wasn't that surprising, but it had to happen. I'm glad you liked it :) as for your last advice, I'll definitely think about that as I continue this story.

Thank you so much for reading, and for always leaving great reviews! I really appreciate it!!


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