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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey Camille, I’m here with your requested review!

I really liked how you started this. Those four words just seemed to carry so much power and potency, and it let you know what this one-shot was going to be about. It also meant that you wanted to carry on reading; so many things could be a mistake, so I think your use of ambiguity here worked really well.

I really liked the flashback too. Even though this female, and male, character is still relatively unknown to us, we got to learn a bit more about her character, and I liked how she seemed rather different to most women of that time, as it made a great change. You seemed to add some originality to her, and I really enjoyed reading that.

The third section, the one about the Aunt was great as it revealed more to us, and due to the use of ‘crucio’, it seemed to tell us that it was Bellatrix, because who else would use that curse without fearing about the consequences?

I really liked the romantic flashback, it was just so sweet, and contrasted nicely with the dark scene beforehand. By having that it also meant that we got to know more about their relationship and that meant we were more likely to feel emotion when the ending happened.

I really liked that you made your MC date a muggle, as it just seemed to work so effective, and then what Bellatrix had to do at the end was just so dramatic. I didn’t think I would feel that sad about her death, and what happened to the MC, due to the ambiguity of it, but it worked in this story, and you felt as if you really connected with the characters.

I think the little flashback at the end was a great way to end it, as it was just so sincere and you could tell how much they meant it.

I have no CC’s and I thought it was an excellent one-shot!

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: EEEK! OH NO. I TOTALLY THOUGHT I HAD RESPONDED TO THIS LIKE... A MONTH AGO, SOMTHING MUST HAVE HAPPENED! I AM SO SO SORRY KIANA! :(

Anyways, thank you so much for the review, your's are always the best. You know it's really surprising because everyone has been saying that the Aunt was Bellatrix but I never really intended for that. But if that's what you saw then it's okay, because that's the beauty of it. Meep. I am in the habit of killing characters. it's not good.

Thanks again for the review! :)


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