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Review:Ardeith says:
I liked this chapter...more HOPE! ;-)

This was one of those great details that is so real: "But all of these things were thrown into a different light now that she actually worked here. The glamor of the building had long since faded away, to be replaced by both a sense of obligation" Poor Beth! It's never so glamorous when you actually work there and are running the most boring of errands.

Onto speculation...Yeah, Timothy Parrish...I originally thought that he was just there to remind Beth how strongly she felt about Sev. You know..."I must really want Sev if I can't feel anything about a good looking, nice wizard who seems into me". But then you asked about him, so is he more significant? A Death Eater spy maybe? (Are you laughing yet?)

Yeah, I think it was Peter in the atrium, meeting a contact. Awful to think what Peter will soon do...

Silly Remus! Did he really think that Beth would be satisfied with just KNOWING Sev's memories exist somewhere?!? Doesn't he know Beth or James or Sirius at all? ;-)

Author's Response: Always more hope! ♥ And I just want to let you know how much I sincerely appreciate it that nearly every one of your reviews consists of you picking out a line or two that you enjoyed in the chapter. That really makes me feel fantastic, knowing someone's paid enough attention to something I've written to do that! Thank you, Ardeith!

Timothy Parrish comes back in two or three more chapters (I think it's two, but I can't remember for sure right now), so he is of more import than just this little run-in. How much, though, I can't say outright! He is in this chapter a definite reminder for Beth of Severus, though, in that she can't move on from him. You're spot-on about that.

Right?! Beth's not going to just sit there now that she knows there's more hope to be had! (I've really played up the notion of hope in this book, haven't I?) Rest assured, she's not going to be idle!

Thank you for another lovely review, Ardeith! And I'm sorry it took a little time to respond to it. ♥ I'm trying desperately hard to get better at prompt review responses!

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