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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
"Where's Lily?" Albus asked, looking around the room. It had been about an hour since - an hour since what? Harry and Ginny leaving?

Teddy was the one who was babysitting them and if he couldn't be bothered to keep an eye on them all, then that was his own fault. - best line ever. I love Albus.

They really are so selfish and clingy and dependent, it's hilarious to read. And Albus shouting "Tell us something we don't know!" Is definitely another favorite line.

I love that Harry threatens to make them live in the cupboard under the stairs, considering he lived in the cupboard. Oh, the irony!!! And it's Al's hiding spot!

I can't believe he broke James' arm, then said it was unfair to be grounded. I can't wait to see how he gets out of it with Harry. I'm already agreeing that Harry will crack and I just wanna yell "come on, Harry! You're stronger than this" at the screen!

Amazing chapter. Loved it. :D

Sam.

Author's Response: I am so glad that you pointed that out, I was in a rush to put the chapter into the queue that I forgot all about going over and reading it again haha.

I love that line too :D Albus is so mean to poor Teddy :D

They are extremely selfish and clingy children well teenagers actually :p

Haha oh Harry, he seems to think that living under the cupboard under the stairs is a threat, but his children would definitely get him back for that.

Yep Albus broke poor James's arm.
Harry is definitely going to be cracking soon, he's going to need all of the support he can get!

*waves flag and cheers about believing in Harry*

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