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Review:marauder5 says:
I'm always so excited when I see that you have added a new chapter to this story. And they usually live up to my expectations :) This one exceeded them, actually! Brilliant!

I thought to myself when I realized that Ginny had been gone for so man times that it would not be like her to just disappear without telling anyone. She would know that they would be worried, and she'd let them know she was okay. So I was sure something bad had happened - and I guess I was right.

I was glad to see that Hermione and Ron was able to cheer Harry up for a while. However, I'm not sure that I believe it would have happened exactly like that. I mean, Ron should have been as devastated and worried as Harry, and Ginny IS one of Hermione's best friends. I just feel like they seemed to easygoing about the whole thing.

Of course Harry would sneak out on his own and save his wife - I think one of his weaknesses (and strengths, I suppose) is the fact that he never wants to put anyone else in danger by asking them for help. I can't wait to see what will happen. You ended the chapter in the perfect place - you leave the reader craving for more. So I do hope that you'll be merciful enough to write and publish the next chapter as quickly as you can, because I for one will be holding my breath :)

Author's Response: This is probably the longest review I've ever gotten :O THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TAKING THE TIME TO DO THIS, IT REALLY MEANS A LOT.

And I was really iffy with this chapter, I wasn't sure if I wrote it right...but apparently I sort of did, which makes me feel a little bit better. I needed some imperfections to come into this story, so this is what ended up happening.

With the Ron and Hermione scene, that was the one I had the most trouble with. It was the last thing I wrote, and I was fed up with this chapter, having rewritten it more times than I would have liked. I completely agree with what you say about Ron and Hermione, but I think that this whole thing has been each of them a bit off.

Hermione doesn't like to show her emotions to many people, right? She's strong and she likes to get things done, and I bet it pains her not to be able to help find Ginny. Ron, on the other hand, is one of the hardest characters to write for me. He seems like simple character, but I find him to be complex more than anything. So I had him stay quite for most of it, let Hermione do the talking. And maybe they all needed to just forget about reality for a little bit and just have fun, because they all needed that desperately.

And this review has encouraged me to go write the next chapter, which will probably be one of the hardest chapters to write :)

Thank you SO much for reviewing, I know my response is a bit ( A LOT ) long. But I just get really excited when I see someone take this much time to type out a review!

Thank you so much, it's readers like you that keep me going ^.^ I hope to see you soon!

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