Gah, dimples...hold on, I'm still laughing about that.
I was a wee bit overwhelmed with OCs, but I'm sure I'll get to know them better later on. I'm not worried about it ;)
Assuming this fun little story is about Albus/Gen (alen? genbus? gus?), I'm all for them. Plus, I think Albus is a boss, so...yeah.
Trishna is epic! We'd probably be best friends, smoking floo-leaves together! Monica...eh, I don't have much of an opinion with that ball o' laughs (sarcasm). However, I have noticed that Albus does (woah, someone should give me the "blatantly obvious you idiot" award), so I'm assuming she's going to break his wee heart. :/
Albus, if you're reading this, just know that we've all had our share of awful girlfriends. Stay strong, kid.
Gen's secret...is that her love of dimples? Hehehe...dimples, so random, and yet not at the same time. I was a bit surprised, but I learned not to really expect anything short of a surprise from Gen. She's one of those delightful characters that keeps me on my toes.
I do like this fic and, so far, I adore you! I'm thinking of reading another story of yours. You've got such a pleasant writing style :D
Until I send you another obnoxious review,
Author's Response: No need to be sorry. I enjoy my readers laughter.
And that did not sound weird at all...
Ahem, moving on. It was a lot of OCs in little time, but I promise, we'll all get to know them better soon.
Two people have suggested the ship name Genbus. Hm, we might make it official, yes? As for Al being a boss... I'm sure Gen would snort derisively at that. ;)
Trishna is a girl I can totally see myself befriending, too. We'd hang around dingy bars, drinking martini and ragging on chauvanistic males. Monica /is/ a heart-breaker, but Al's deluded by her feminine wiles.
Yup, Gen's secret is her penchant for dimpled guys. I guess it's because normally, she's such a tomboy, she'd like to keep the information that she's so absurdly 'girly' in a way, hidden. And she appreciates the compliment.
Aww, thank you. I'm grinning right now. :D
Eagerly awaiting another /obnoxious/ review,