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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Heya! Sorry this review took so long. I have an unfairly small amount of free time at the moment. In fact, I should be in bed right now, or perhaps studying so if this review starts rambling on or making absolutely no sense, I apologize in advance.

First of all, I love the way you have characterized Rose, especially in this chapter. She is definitely a thinker, and seems to think through every little aspect of her life. She seems as though she doesn't like things to go unplanned...making her decision to marry Xander quite out of character. I think it's clear that she likes him, maybe even loves him...but I'm not sure whether she is in love with him. I really hope she works out her feelings...and quickly, too! I didn't think I was going to like Xander but after this chapter, I do (he seems like such a sweeties) and I don't want to see either him or Scorpius getting hurt.

Hehehehe, I really enjoyed the first flashback. Dom was great, getting completely intoxicated within an hour and then vomiting all over the doormat. Oh my goodness, I can just imagine Fleur's reaction! I also like all of Dom's interactions with Rose in this chapter. I think they balance each other out quite nicely. Rose is definitely more level-headed and Dom is more wild...but she can be very insightful and helpful and it's clear that all she is trying to do is look out for her cousin.

I really enjoyed reading all your comments about Victoire in this chapter. I could definitely see that she and Dom were sisters! And Rose's whole wedding had turned into a bit of disaster, hasn't it? I am super eager to see what is going to happen next!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: It's fine, I understand what life can get like, I feel bad for keeping you up now!

I'm glad that you liked Rose's characterisation and that you picked up on her being a thinker, as she does like to analyse everything! Yes she does need to sort her feelings out, otherwise when she gets to the altar it will be awkward!

I didn't think I would like Xander when I was writing this either, and when I finished I was surprised that I did, so I'm glad that you do too! I don't want either of them to get hurt as well, but one will have to.

I'm glad that you that you enjoyed the first flashback, I can imagine that Fleur wouldn't be pleased at all. I guess the reason why Rose and Dom are such good friends, is like you said, they need each other to be normal!

I'm glad that you liked the little comments about Victoire, I enjoyed slipping them in! Yay you're excited, I hope it lives up to your expectations!

-Kiana :D

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