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Review:nott theodore says:
Hello again!

This is another fantastic chapter! It was great to see Al working so hard to get Lucy's forgiveness, and that he really does regret his outburst. Also it's nice to see a main character who is flawed, because in a lot of stories the guy seems to be pretty much perfect. This perspective really gives us a better idea of Albus' character.

I love the idea of Rose being willing to help Albus - who seems pretty hopeless from this point of view - even when he was horrible to her. The relationship between them is so sweet, but realistic at the same time. The kiss at the end was great to read about from Al's point of view, too.

I can't wait to read the rest of this story and I hope you update soon again!

nott theodore :)

Author's Response: Yeah...I was pretty determined to make Al a flawed character. You don't see it a lot in Animal Magnetism but I always imagined Al with a bit of an anger problem (since his father tended to have the same problem when he was pushed) and this is a good way to show that more. I'm glad you liked the chapter, thanks for reviewing!

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