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Review:MargaretLane says:
I'm surprised at the way it sounds as if they'll have the same teachers after the holidays as beforehand. And that they apparently had a specifically English teacher before this. I'm assuming they are about to start Hogwarts, so shouldn't they have just left primary school?

I like the way you are showing the different personalities of the two girls. We are getting a really good impression of who they both are

I'm guessing their parents were actually witches and wizards. I thought they might have been killed under Voldemort, but I guess if they were three years old at the time, that's unlikely, as you've mentioned next generation characters in the list of characters, so I assume they are at least Teddy's age and the war was over by the time he turned three.

Hmm, I wonder what is going on here.

Intriguing beginning for a story.

I just noticed one spelling mistake (or typo really). When they are talking about the book, Flora says it'll be their English text "when OR school reopens". You left out a "u".

Author's Response: Answering your first query, the girls are in same class, taking same subjects and though other teachers can be different than previous year, their mother being a teacher, knows beforehand that she is going to be their English teacher. And since the girls are of eleven, they must have completed their fifth grade, so teachers and subjects in fifth and sixth grade are similar as far as I know.

Well, their parents, their age, their life... that's the mystery in the story so I won't reveal anything for now, just keep guessing!

Thank you for appreciation though! And I'll edit the spelling mistake when I get time to.

Keep reading... :)


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