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Review:ValWitch21 says:
I know I said I'd review chapter six, but then I lost my Internet connection and only got it back to find out chapter seven was up, sooo...

First of all, HAPPY (late) BIRTHDAY!

Rose is so much fun to read about. I can totally imagine her grumbling about waking up early and about having to wear rain boots, then snapping at Al to walk faster.

I know I've said this before, but I love the way you manage to make something that usually comes across as dull -- trying on dresses -- interesting and fun to read about. I'm surprised by Rose's change of attitude to Darcy, but I suppose it's because she's realised how much she means to Al?

Now, moving on to those two. They are way too cute for their good, and they need to stop being so shy! What do they need to understand their feelings, a poster?

Sorry if I sound a bit agressive... It's just that they're adorable, and I really want them to do something about it!

Another great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you (wishes she could put a heart here)!

I think--or at least I hope--we can all identify with Rose from time to time. I think even the most low-maintenance people get fed up and frustrated when little things mess up their groove. I can't imagine being so high-strung as to complain as much as Rose does, though!

I was again worried that this would be a dull chapter, but I'm glad it wasn't for you. Rose and Darcy still aren't big fans of each other, but I don't think Rose notices Darcy enough to be honestly put off by her, haha. As you saw from the cafe scene, Rose isn't as vapid and shallow as she often seems, and she does care about her family, even if she bosses them around. Not sure if the crush is really obvious enough for Rose to pick up on it, but I would think that she would respect Albus's feelings and try to leave him alone somewhat.

Haha, that's fine! It will come, I promise. The next chapter, incidentally, is my favorite of all.

Thanks for another wonderful review :)


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