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Review:MarauderLover7 says:
Sorry it's been so long between reviews! You wouldn't believe how busy I've been! :/
But, business aside, this was a brilliant chapter. There was so much going on that I had to read it three times to be sure I'd got it all. :P
"Leave it to Ron to be the last one here when he lives down the road." Good old George. :P And typical Ron. I loved the part about him shoving the kids through the Floo, as well. :P
Dom was... interesting. I don't know what to make of her yet, but Sirius is intrigued and that intrigues me too. :)
I love that Sirius went to talk with Teddy - it's so nice to see him filling little roles that Remus would have if he was still around - I'm sure Remus and Tonks appreciate it, wherever they are. :)
I loved the furry little problem reference, particularly because James is fully aware of the implications behind what he's saying. :P
Poor Teddy's so moody, but I can understand why. I hope things are patched up with him and Vic soon.
'"Teddy's in there!" Lily hissed.
"Good, he can listen too." James knocked on the door.' For some reason, this reminds me - immensely - of Hermione and Ron's bickering. :P I suppose it's not surprising when you consider that they're family, but still. :P
I'm intrigued about this new plot development, too. Ginny was great by the way, being her usual self, even if it is to the Minister. Am I right to assume 'Smith' was Zacharias? At first I thought Kingsley was there because he'd somehow found out about Sirius, but now Death Eaters are being attacked? :O Wow. Not something I saw coming. Does that mean there will be more of the Malfoys? I'm interested to meet Draco, Astoria and Scorpius. :P
So, to repeat myself: very busy, very good chapter. :P
I'll read the next one when I have the time. :)
MarauderLover7.

Author's Response: Oh don't worry! It's been crazy on my end too. So not to worry! I completely understand.
I'm glad that you read it a few times. I did add a lot into this chapter - but there are also so many characters that I could reference. I do have to say that the Ron scene was probably one of my favorites to write. I tried to think of the most Ronish way to enter the scene. So I picked late, leaving a house over, and shoving his kids threw the fireplace to make it 'on time.' Hermione bickering at him was just the cherry on top. :)

Haha, you'll see Dom more in the chapter coming up. She will be more involved once she starts school though. :)

The furry little problem reference was something I've been wanting to sneak in there for a while. It doesn't have the full effect it did for Remus. But Sirius would still find it funny coming from the new James with comparison to Remus's son. But yes, James did do it because he knew Sirius would get the reference and he was actually probably a bit reckless saying that and Sirius was careless for laughing. It was still a fun scene though. XD

They do have a Hermione/Ron tone there. I intended it more to be James not listening to his sister - when typically he does - but it did come off that way. ;)

Haha, I have a feeling that Ginny meeting Kingsley how she did would affect her attitude toward him in the future. She respects and like Kingsley dearly, but her husband and family comes first - meaning she would probably be this way to anyone. It just happens she knows Kingsley.

Yes, you are correct. Zacharias is Smith. I was was wondering if someone would catch it. He doesn't have a major part, but I did want another familiar face. I picked him because of his history with Harry and Ginny.

I thought about having Kingsley find out - but if he did/does he would probably go for an indirect approach and not involve the Ministry if possible. So this was just plot development - because Harry can not possible have a normal Christmas.

There will be more of the Malfoy's - but that will be later on. :) I can assure you that there will be lots of interesting development there. ;)

Thank you! And don't worry! Take your time. My updating rampage is about to fall back a bit, because I'm off break and have two exams coming up. Haha.

Thank you for the review!

Taz


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