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Review:patronus_charm says:
Haha I loved the start of this, it just reminded me of how me and my sister can get at times! I really like how you just threw us into the story, sometimes it can lead to confusion, but I didn’t find that was the case with this story. I think it was because you then went back and added in some explanations, which meant that the reader didn’t get lost.

I really like what you’ve done with the names, it made me laugh! I liked how Autumn and Summer were twins, as I’ve never seen that done before. I also thought it was great that you made them argue, as people tend to assume that twins will be best friends, but this seemed to be a more accurate portrayal.

I liked how you made the family quirky! With their dad leaving them, you don’t often see single parent families in fan fiction. Then them being tall, having the name ‘calendar girls’, and not appearing to be too keen on it. Then with the older generation being quirky, and of course there had to be a gay uncle! I love the name Noah by the way, it fitted in really well :)

I really liked the banter between Roger and Noah, it was just funny to watch. You set up really nice dynamic for their relationship, and you can tell that they were friends as well as being a couple, and you don’t often see relationships portrayed so accurately. Autumn’s narration was great. It just had the right amount of wit and sarcasm, and she made funny observations on everything.

The characters all seemed really original and unique, and you could tell that they each had their own identity. I also liked how you spread the Potter/Weasley clan among the houses, as it creates some cool dynamics!

I thought this was a great first chapter, and thanks for the swap!

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: HELLO YOU :)

I'm glad you didn't find this too confusing -- a lot of people have told me it was (and I totally agree, by the way). Autumn and Summer being twins sprouted from a three-in-the-morning-illumaination for a parody: I had the red-head and the blond, and then things kind of turned to this.

Siblings argue. That's just how it goes. This is entirely based on my relationship with my brother, actually, and again, I'm glad you like it!

Yes, Noah and Roger are great, aren't they? :)

The Potters and Weasleys all being in Gryffindor is one stereotype that annoys me, for soem reason, so obviously I went down the other road and dispatched them everywhere...

Thank you so much for another of your lovely reviews :D

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