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Review:TheHouseElf says:
Hey Kayla!

I must admit, that I absolutely love this song to pieces, it is definitely one of my favourite Ed Sheeran songs and that was one of the reasons that I read this. I don't tend to read song-fics that much, but this was so beautifully structured, each little snippet giving us a glimpse as to how excited Percy and Audrey were, only to have their unborn son cruelly taken away from him. It did make me tear up a little *sniffs* Just a little note, maybe draw out the miscarriage part a little longer? For me, personally it just ended a little too abruptly, maybe one part talking about the pain, another about receiving the news? But that's minor, you did a really great job on this :D

~Aisha

Author's Response: Hey, Aisha! :D

It's one of my favourites as well. :')

I'm glad you liked the structuring, it gave me hell! :p

See, I lost a little brother due to my mum having a miscarriage as well (one of my main reasons to writing this) and honestly, it feels like one second you're getting excited for a new pair of feet running around the house and then the next it's literally torn away from you. I don't remember much because it was nearly nine years ago but I do remember Mum and Dad telling us and it was so shocking and really appeared out of nowhere.

Also, I didn't want to make it too graphic because it IS a very sensitive issue for a lot of people.

I do see your point, though I probably won't change it because I purposely did that. Thanks for the tip anyway! :)

Thanks for the lovely review, dear! ♥


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