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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
This is another brilliant, funny chapter!! It's really engaging, the narrative works really well and helps show both sides of the story - both people's thoughts and opinions - in that sense you've got the best out of first person and third person and created your new kind of narrative. It's really nice how you smoothed their relationship out again, and the way the arkwardness comes and goes - it makes it gripping, totally understandable and even cringy at times - which is hard to do through writing I guess. The chapter title says it all...though I was delighted when the minister for magic walked in.unpredicitibe, but she coped well.
Peanut butter chicken nuggets sound extremely inventive and delicious though ;)

Author's Response: Hey!

I'm so glad you like the narrative; it was sort of a big decision to write them both in first person, it was either going to be this or third person because I couldn't imagine writing only one PoV, and I'm glad I chose to do this because everyone seems to like it. :)

Peanut butter chicken nuggets sound delicious and I keep meaning to actually try it, but every time I buy one I forget the other. :P

Thank you so much for leaving a lovely review!


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