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Review:patronus_charm says:
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I thought it was a really interesting way to start the story. The sense of confusion we were feeling seemed to echo what Victoire was feeling, and that was a nice touch. It her descriptions were interesting as she noted that the man was free, so it made you think that she was tied to something, and then it was revealed that she, in fact, in a prison of some sort, and I liked the gradual revealing process.

I liked the dialogue between the siblings, as it was funny to see it was Louis who appeared to be the more caring and considerate one, not Dom. I liked Dom’s characterisation, and it made me laugh about how insensitive she was. I also liked how you showed how much Vic wanted to be comforted by her father, as the parent child relationship isn’t explored much, so I enjoyed the brief hint at it here.

I really liked how you played with the mood of the story, at first there was confusion as to where she was, and what was happening, then almost annoyance and anger with the sibling scene, then there was the cute part with her reminiscing about her first date with Teddy, then the sorrowful part when she reveals what had happened to him. That brought tears to my eyes.

The only CC I have is perhaps consider a prequel to this which showed his death scene, as I was curious about how he could have died protecting Victoire.

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely review - and sorry for how long it took me to reply. But never fear: if you leave me a review, I will ALWAYS reply. At some stage.

Okay, sorry for my cheesiness. OMG, now you have put the idea of a prequel into my head! So tempting...hmmm...

Thanks again!
Courtney:)

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