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Review:CambAngst says:
I'm so close to the end! Well there went the morning. ;) But I have to know how it ends now. I have to!

The way you wrote Harry's family's reaction was really sweet. I know it isn't a major part of the story, but I still think it added something. The reactions of all three children were perfect: Lily just being scared and confused, Albus seeking reassurance and comfort from his father and James -- who must be 16 or 17 years old if Al is 14 -- just trying to work it all out for himself. A great piece of writing.

I loved Teddy's back story. It filled in so much for me and gave me some closure on a lot of my long-running questions. Teddy's story of suffering from smoke inhalation and not being able to explain who he really is makes sense on a certain level, but I also thought it was a little strange. There can't be very many metamorph kids in Britain. And since he obviously came from the night club, wouldn't the family have simply waited for somebody to come back and investigate the fire and said, "By the way, we found a wizard kid lying about." Anyway, I understand that you needed a way for Teddy to meet his nemesis. It's terrible to imagine Teddy and David both being so terrified of this kid that they had to flee the country to get away from him. Simon Ross is obviously a nasty piece of work.

It seems like between Teddy and David, they have all the evidence they need to go after Ross. They just need to know where to look. It also appears that there's somebody else out there in the world who's trying to help them. I wonder whether it was Ross, himself, who planted the file? I'm thinking back to how angry he was when he thought that "Theo Moon" was claiming credit for his crimes. He seems like the type of killer who does it for the attention, the type who almost wants to be caught, just so he can properly take credit for his demented genius.

At any rate, I'm going to know soon enough. No turning back now. I'll see you in the next chapter!

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