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Review:alicia and anne says:
Wow Ally has a big family! Neville and Hannah have certainly been busy!
That must have been so awkward for Ally to tell her mother that she didn't know who the father/s were. It's great that she's being so sympathetic and supportive of Ally, kinda, I think it'll take a while for her to get her head around it all.
I hope that Neville comes around soon, Although I reckon he'll be on the look out at Hogwarts trying to find the culprit. Probably going to make their life hell :D
I love how Frankie is the protective brother, I can't wait to see him talking to the guy who made his sister pregnant, I think he's going to be having a stern word or two.
I really can't wait to see how this develops, I just know that it's going to be great!

Author's Response: Hello again,

Ally certainly has a big family what with her four siblings. I think Neville would have wanted quite a few since he was an only child as well as the fact he is so loving. He and Hannah have certainly been busy. :)

I would imagine so as well, one thing telling your parents your pregnant at sixteen but another is telling them there are three potential ones and you don't know which one it is.

I think it would take anyone awhile to adjust to the news and with Hannah she wants to support Ally but she isn't sure how to since the news is still sinking in.

As for Neville, he'll come around when the time comes and who knows what he'll do to find out who the father is.

Oh I believe Frankie will have a stern word or two, or maybe even more. He is definitely not an older older brother to be messed with when his siblings, especially his sisters are involved.

Thanks again for reading, reviewing and favouriting. I'm hoping to put chapter 3 up soon!!

soph xxx

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