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Review:Debra20 says:
You are brilliant! Yes, yes you! I cannont believe how hooked I was by this chapter. It was somewhat long (over 3000 words) but the funny thing is, I never noticed when I had finished the chapter. That's how much I enjoyed it!

I'm so so happy that I finally caught up with your story and I can now eagerly await the next chapter, together with everyone else. You've grown so much since the beginning of the story. The core is still the same but you really took into consideration what people advised you and it showed. You explored more character feels, the pace is a lot slower which is amazing because it builds the tension better. It's a big thing to take criticism kindly, filter it through your own rational process and your own ideas of the story, and then applying it to the story. You're one step further to becoming a very accomplished writer :D

The note Rose received really freaked me felt like they were being watched or something. I must admit that there are moments when I am as paranoid as Scorpius, so reading something like this was totally unsettling lol. I am VERY intrigued as to what is up this weird society. One one hand I'd like to believe that what they claim is true, and they set out to help Rose, but on the other hand I can't help but doubt. Really girl you should read Game of Thrones. People betray and back stab people ALL the time there that it completely changes how you read other stories. Especially mystery stories. You will never truly trust a character again haha

Author's Response: If I started reading Game of Thrones, this novella would become a series of 14 novels :D So no, not yet. Maybe after exams in the fall.

The Peverell Society is at the bottom of this, in case it hasn't become obvious, but whether they want to help Rose or not... we'll have to wait and see! Thank you again for reviewing!

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