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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
WoW. Pretty much the opposite of what I was expecting to happen in this chapter, although I have to admit that Oliver's non-sensical rambling was pretty funny!!

I think we got a much better look at what makes Edie tick in this chapter. I really enjoyed hearing about how she helped take care of her younger brothers; I really feel like that gave a whole other aspect to her character and it made her more relatable (not that she wasn't relatable before, though!).

Another brilliant chapter, and I'm having mixed feelings about this next one. I can't wait to read it... but then there will be no more for me to read right now!! :(

Author's Response: Yes, I enjoy socially awkward Oliver. If you've noticed, he rambles nonsensically when he's got a certain motive behind his words ;3

I'm glad you liked the little brothers thing! I've had that in my own mind since I first created Edie. To me, it's always been a major part of her character, and important to understanding why she is the way she is. But unfortunately it didn't appear in the story until now! I think when KC&CO is all finished, I'm going to go back and give the her brothers (or the L-Team, as Val so brilliantly calls them) a little more face time.

Thanks again!

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