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Review:melian says:
Very nicely done! I like the juxtaposition between the expectation that she behave like the lady she has been brought up to be, and the little girl wanting to express herself. It seems a little odd to me that Narcissa would be seen as an arbiter of change, though I suppose there iscertainly an argument for that.

One thing that did strike me is the description of her having strawberry blonde hair. Narcissa is always portrayed as having white blonde hair, not with a tinge of red as strawberry would indicate. Not necessarily an error, but something that struck me as odd.

Anyway, that nolwithstanding, I thought it was a very interesting take on her Sorting. Well done!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the delay in responding.

I am glad you liked this, and the way I showed how Narcissa was caught up between the lady and the girl. I think she could be the arbiter of change - after all, if she had not lied to Voldemort about Harry being dead, things would have turned out very different in the end.

I thought that perhaps as a child she could have had strawberry blonde hair and it grew lighter over the years?

I am glad you like it though, thank you!

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