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Review:melian says:
"Is he asleep now?"
"Yeah, let's call it asleep." LOL!

I'm rather curious about La Oscurità, not least because I went to school with someone with a name very similar to Danny Rayner. The idea that they would kidnap Hugo Weasley in order to get at Theodore Nott, though, seems a little on the strange side. They barely knew each other so why would anyone try a tactic quite so obscure? Oh well, I'm sure all will be revealed in coming chapters.

Really enjoying this story, Sam, aand that little scene at the end really added to it. Look forward to you posting more!

cheers, Mel

Author's Response: Haha, I liked that part, too.

La Oscurita are a very powerful, very scary gang, consisting of both muggles and wizards and everything in between. They're ruthless and evil and fun to write.

They took Hugo for two reasons - one, they know that Theo likes Hermione but that he'd still be objective enough to work because Hugo isn't his in any way, they want Theo dead for putting their boss, Danny's brother, in jail; two, they consider Hugo special and they're looking to make him a member when he's older.

Thank you so much for leaving a review! I hope finished it and liked it. :)

Sam.


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