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Review:CambAngst says:
Hi, Sam! Back for some more Review Battle goodness!

Your antagonist, assuming that's who we see alone in the room at the beginning, is magnificently creepy. He gives off the air of a hunter: efficient, meticulous and deadly. It almost sounds like he's caressing the knife. By the end of the section, I was pretty sure that this poor girl was doomed.

Your Ron and Harry had a film noir feel to them, almost like characters from a 1950's detective movie. Ron is moving about, gathering evidence and doing the work while Harry seems detached and cerebral. I love the idea of him trying to follow the killer's movements, see what the killer was seeing. I feel like this is going to turn into one of those psychological dramas where the police officer gets in too deep while he's trying to put himself into the mind of the killer, and I'm very excited about it!

So strangulation, 20 stab wounds and the Killing Curse? This guy wasn't leaving anything to chance, was he? We obviously have an antagonist who enjoys the violent aspect of killing. Perhaps somebody who deals a great deal with death but has never killed, himself? I have a theory here... We'll just have to see whether I'm right.

I couldn't find a single typo of grammatical problem. Very nice job with that! I think you're off to an awesome start. Here goes Dan, about to get hooked on another one of Sam's WIP's...

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