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Review:melian says:
Ah, a nice turnaround there with the link back to Adam's comic shop in London. I wasn't expecting it but it so works. :) And I can fully understand why Hermione would be so keen for someone - ANYONE - to find Hugo. As a mother myself, I can't imagine anything worse than having a child go missing. It was very Hermione, though, to have her break down only momentarily before catching herself : I can see her not wanting to appear vulnerable before someone like Theodore Nott. Overall it's quite good characterisation, from what I've seen, so well done.

Oh, and the tan line? I'm curious. What happened to Ron?

cheers, Mel

Author's Response: Yeah, I couldn't get rid of Adam. He was stuck with me.

Harry is the easiest for me to write, but I feel okay with Hermione; it seemed like something she would do in that situation. I'm glad you agree. :)

Ron is fine.

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