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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello!

I thought this was a great first chapter to your story! It introduced the two characters, Greg and Matt really well and it was really sweet to see an eleven year old get his Hogwarts letter for the first time! You did the whole thing really well. I always imagined that a teacher would go and speak to the Muggleborn students straight away as everything would need explaining although I'm not sure if that's because I read something or just an idea I have in my head. Either way it was nice that Greg had someone there to answer all his questions.

I really like your characterisation of Matt, he was making me smile all the way though. He seemed to really enjoy the fact that he could tell Greg everything but he didn't have to tell him straight away. He kept making him get a drink or wait until later - poor Greg's got more patience than me!

This was a really great start though so well done :) I look forward to reading more in the future.

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the read - a long time since anyone read this one, I think, so thanks for taking the trouble to dig it out!

I am glad you like the characters - they have a long way to go and a lot to learn over the course of this story, but I hope you follow them on their journey.

See you around,

Sheriff


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