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Review:DarknessIsMyOnlyFriend says:
First of all I want to say I really like your writing style. You described just enough of the surroundings and such, to give the reader an image and for that reader's imagination to take it from there. And you worked in a description of some of Dominique's features without giving it too much attention. You made it fit in the story seamlessly. And she is a Ravenclaw, making it a perfect fit for her to come back for her notebook fist.
And making her go after a story like this, I like it. And making her afraid despite the better examples so close to her. Nice touch, realistic.

I also like the idea of going into her life after school, unlike most stories I've seen about her. It's different and gives you many opportunities on where you could take the story.
I do wonder what made you go with Teddy Lupin. I'm very curious to read more about that!
And the way you put in 'smaller' details of characters is impressive!

It's a good start. It sparks my interest and curiosity!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. Sorry for the delay in responding.

I am pleased that you like my writing style with all the descriptions and such. Its good to know Dominique's features and traits came across to you. I am glad that you found this realistic too, so thanks.

I always thought that in-school life is rather cliche (and I always find it difficult to write) so its great you like this idea of after-school.

Teddy & Dominique are my OTP haha. More about their relationship will be revealed later.

I am so happy you noticed and liked the smaller interests too. Thanks a lot for all your lovely words.

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