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Review:adluvshp says:
Wow. This was certainly quite...shocking (for lack of a better word).

I absolutely loved your take on Rose and Scorpius. A very different plot indeed. I think you did a great job capturing Rose's attitude. She definitely came off as impressive to me. I also liked how this began with her mother's words. It is quite weird to imagine the Hermione we know say something like that, but hey this is fanfiction, and well people grow up different to what they were as teens, so it is all acceptable.

I loved the cold attitude with which Rose entered the room and such, and then we see Scorpius all tied up and pleading, and it was a very powerful scene. I also liked how Scorpius' dialogues gave us a slight hint as to what had happened.

At first, I thought she'd kill him, but when their eyes met and they got intimate, I was almost sure she'd forgive him or something, or maybe he'd overpower her and escape. So, in the end, when she killed him, it caught me off guard. I loved how it happened though, you have a great writing style.

I didn't quite understand what Rose meant by "You had me, darling." but they were cool words nonetheless and made an impact.

All in all, a very powerful and well-written piece. I really enjoyed reading this. It was very interesting and I wish it was longer!

Great job! 10/10


Author's Response: Goodness, I am so sorry for leaving this reply so late :P

This fic is one of my very first stories on the archives and to this day I still like it, so I'm glad you did too! The idea was to turn the stereotypes of the characters on their heads so I'm pleased you think I achieved that. Subverting norms is one of my favourite things to do ;)

With that line it just meant that he had metaphorically had a hold on her over the years... as well as perhaps other things...

Thanks for reviewing!

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