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Review:MissMdsty says:
And the plot thickens.

Being a Law graduate I'm really loving the part where they analyze the will and try to figure out what they could do. It left quite a mess behind but in a family as rich as the Blacks, I hardly think money is a cause for murder.

Sirius is really the odd man out in all of this. Locked in a house with these people, he's forced to come to terms with the loss while having to interact with them. Narcissa hasn't yet lost her humanity but Bella is well on her way. Something about the way in which she isn't as affected by her father's death makes me think she had a hand in it.

The end of this chapter! Oh my God! Reading that makes me think of another theory, that maybe some supernatural dark force is involved? A curse perhaps? I guess we'll have to wait and see.

I love your writing in this story, you create such an amazing and complex cast of characters and I'm very excited to see how it plays out! Good job!

Author's Response: Hey there - welcome back! :)

On a quick side note: I'm a Law student too - and it's definitely a lot of fun working out how the will would work and exploring the differences between the wizarding and muggle worlds. Geeky as I'm sure that is :P

Yeah, it's definitely all a mess - money might be, might not be... who knows? :P

He's very outside but also inside - it's a curious balance, I think, and I love writing his interactions with his family. Yeah, I definitely think it doesn't help that they've lost one of their own and they're all in the same place - it makes it difficult for each of them to go through it on their own. Narcissa and Bella are an interesting combination - I actually really enjoyed writing them here. Might have to do it again later on :P

Mahaha, I'm glad it shocked you! I had such a hard time writing it to be ambiguous, but at the same time definite enough in terms of what was actually happening and what the outcome was, so I'm so glad you really like it! I love the theories - supernatural dark forces sound pretty cool! ;)

Thank you so so much for this review - I'm so excited to write the rest of it and I hope you enjoy what comes next!

Aph xx


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