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Review:academica says:
I just read something that was super dark (but amazing), so this is a nice little palate-cleanser. Glad I chose it!

Oh my gosh, so cute! I love the little Delacour-Weasleys. It's funny to picture Victoire picking on her baby brother and sister, and to imagine Dominique and Louis working together. I liked the ending, too, with Louis enjoying his pudding while spiteful Victoire doesn't get any after dinner. Your characterization was just spot on for everyone. And your French! Between this and Reason to Fight, I'm assuming that you took some classes. Otherwise, that requires some serious researching dedication.

The flow is great, especially for an early-morning-hours creation. I love how I could easily picture every moment, like it was a movie unfolding in front of me. I keep coming back to the image of the door falling open and Fleur's body, hands on hips, blocking out some of the light.

Nice work, Val, and thanks for the swap :)

-Amanda

Author's Response: Victoire is such a sour child child, haha. Picking on younger siblings is part of big sister contract!

Actually, French is my mother tongue, so no, I didn't take classes. It's one of the reasons I like writing Fleur, because I understand how she'd feel having to parallel both languages.

Thank you for the review, I love swapping with you :)


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