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Review:potterfan310 says:
I read this the first time, and I was completely in love with Skylar and Albus so do forgive me if I forget she isn't Skylar anymore.

I was really interested by the new summary as well since I LOVE Al/OC.

I really LOVE the start, it sets up this potrait of what her life was like. I was slightly confused as to why she's called Daisy if her name is Theodosia but I think it might be a nickname?

I really like the dynamics of the sleepover because it wasn't just your average girly get together because the boys were dare and it turned to truth or dare. (Which can be a dangerous game ;))

Oh god James in Ginny's underwear, too funny for words to describe!! I love James and he's such a brilliant character :)

One thing, I think you missed the s of it's - "It' simple."

I'm really intrigued about Daisy's background what with her alcoholic father and evil step-mother. I kinda have an inkling that it might have been her dad who gave her the bruise on her arm.

Way to go Daisy, all I can think is famous last words. She said she wouldn't kiss Al and then what does she go and do: kiss Al.

Love it and I can't wait for the next chappie!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

Author's Response: Thanks for the grammar correction.

The sleepover wasn't supposed to be a typical coed sleepover. When the wotters are involve nothing is typical.

Daisy is her nickname, because honestly nobody want's their friends to go around calling them Theodosia. The name comes into the backstory.

Daisy's back story will reveal it self slowly. not as quickly as Skylar's did. It's a complicated one.

Yeah I've always imagined James as the guy who would actually wear his mothers underwear.

P.S. This story is filled with famous last words.

TheGirlOnFirexx


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