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Review:potterfan310 says:
Why hello new chapter, it has been awhile :)

"brother nocked" - You forget the 'k'

"you canít undo a kid," - I don't know why but I feel Harry would say child rather than kid. Maybe that's just me.
"Albus is on Jamesí back and James is trying to get him off by rubbing his back on the wall. To say this looks wrong would be an understatement." - I love your mental images, fairplay they're the best!!! :D Especially when they involve James and Al ;)

I like Al' Point of view and it was a nice change from Izzy's. I think it was kinda nice of James to come and see him but I do sense something going on between him and Izzy. More than meets the eye, it seems.

Alisa, I'm really intrigued about her and Al. I'm guessing Al proposed but I'm slightly confused, how did he ruin her life? Did he cheat or something?

PREQUEL, PREQUEL, PREQUEL! I want to know what happened between Izzy and James.

Glad you're updating again!!!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x

Author's Response: It has been so long I have forgotten how much I love your reviews! I'm happy you like my mental images, I'm a very visual person so I try to make my writing visual... If that makes any sense lol.
Al and Izzy both have stuff from they're past that I am waiting for the right moment to reveal. And James is probably one of my favorites to write about, because I'm trying to hint that he knows a lot about both Al and Izzy, I'm hope I am succeeding. And as for Alisa, that is something, or rather someone, that I am really excited to write about. It's certainly going to be an interesting next couple of chapters(:
And I can't write a Prequel until I finish this one or else you'll get smashed in the head with a box of spoilers, and the only reason I thought of it was because I didn't want to write a sequel, and I figured if I did a prequel it would be a James/OC. Which I really want to do, so I will probably do that. At some point. ;)
Thank you so much for still reading my story even though I haven't updated in months, I love you a lot,
Claire


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