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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling!!

I really had fun with Albus in this first section. Just the way he kind if didn't know what to do with himself was so amusing. He'd already used the majority of his freaking out up, but at the same time he's more or less freaking out about NOT freaking out. Love it. And his thoughts pertaining to his family and only being able to take them at small doses at a time... Yeah. Absolutely relatable. Hahah

Poor Albus is really struggling with his own mind right now. I'm really impressed with your ability to make his character very well fleshed out. You don't give him a personality trait then go wishy washy in it. Like, you've identified that he freaks out about everything, and you make sure to keep that as a trait instead if just using it when convenient. So far he's worried about being calm, worried about if he should or shouldn't regret his and Lexi's encounter, and lectured himself for thinking about. He's awesome. I want to hug him. Although I think to keep in line with the idea that they both barely remember that night, maybe it would be better if he's kind if fuzzy on how she's was but knows the parts that he does remembered we're great?

I really loved how supportive harry was. The man has seen the world nearly come apart then played a huge part in putting it back together. Of course he won't be thrilled, but it's clear through his attitude towards his son that he does believe whatever it is, it's going to be okay. Because it will. And part of me even wonders if he has an inkling...

Oh goodness. Well, we expected that one. All things considering, getting knocked out really isn't the worst thing that could have happened when telling two families that they're going to be having a baby. Especially at such a young age with no real plans for the future. Yep, he's lucky he just got that. Hahahahahaha.

I'm happy that Theo seemed so understanding! He and harry feel a lot of like. They both grew up in the same time though and saw the same things, so again it feels natural that they wouldn't overreact to certain things that aren't dire or anything. And it's not like they can go back in time and change what's been done, so having Theo be understanding but also point out to Al that things are going to change a whole lot felt really natural.

I loved their conversation. I think it felt really honest and true, and also enjoyed the bit of comic relief with Louis when he interrupted. He seems like a fun guy, haha.

I think the only thing I felt like I missed out on in this chapter is Ginny's reaction. But we might see hers next chapter!! I just think it would be a huge deal to find out your son is going to be a father. Then again, I think I'm just selfish for more of the awkward 'in pregnant' scene. Haha!

Loved this chapter!

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