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Review:EllaShanti says:
Hiya, I'm back :D decided to write a secind review coz i kinda read the chapter in like 5 mins coz I got s o excited and missed some parts so...

First, JACK IS ADORABLE(you know I have to say it at least once per review) and so sweet how much happier he's making lily. Also nice to see reappearance of Al, he's such a cutie. And of course Lily turning into a better character every chapter.But I'm getting a feeling there's more to Jack? Deep hidden secrets maybe? Hmm...

And Ellie...she's completely sane in this chapter yes? So does that mean she's improving or just has like episodes of lucidity? I feel so sorry for her and Lily , but ellie especially maks me want to cry :( but then you bring up t he bit with Ginny, which was funny :D always good to have a laugh :P

And will there be any more on the Alecto case thingo brought up at end of last chapter?

Anyway, keep writing but don't stay miserable too long! Hope things get better for yo soon.

Author's Response: Firstly... erm, I just answered you and I thought you wrote loads... so thank you, so, so much for putting so much time in. I'm truly blessed to have you.
Yes he is (of course you do- it's true) and he has, hasn't he? I like him for that. Hmm... what gives you that feeling? I'm curious, but you don't have to answer. Don't feel obligated to justify yourself or anything- if it's just 'something' then just ignore me :)
Yeah, she's fine in this chapter. She has episodes of everything- she changes day to day, and it's difficult to predict how she's going to be. She's not getting better, yet. I just want to apologize now for the next chapter. Just... yeah. Sorry. Glad you giggled :)
There will, a bit in the next chapter and it'll be cleared up at the end- it's more a literary device than plot point.
I'm better now- yesterday I was sad, but I'm over the worst, so- WRITING. I will do it. :D Thank you :) and thank you for reviewing... again... it's really great of you.

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