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Review:megthechef43 says:

I'm glad they have a lead in the case and a description of the kidnapper. Poor Adam, teasing him on his old age. LOL. i think it is great that there is a connection between Harry, Ginny and Theo. It makes the working relationship more cohesive. I'm still wondering about the break up between Hermione and Ron. I'm surprised she went back to Granger after the spilt.
This story is great but I did notice a few spots where the spelling is a bit off.
"he wanted to the skills and the training or an Auror"

I'm thinking or should be of. Anyway, I personally like it when people point out examples so I can fix it because I not perfect or even close. I have problems catching little things like that because I know what it should say so that is what I see. I hope I'm not offending you.

I'll be reading on...


Author's Response: Hey!

I'm glad, too, hopefully they can find Hugo. :)

The connection between them allowed me to establish a link that would have Ginny talking about Theo to Hermione and I liked how it turned out.

Granger is what I think she would always be called for work and such, from before she was married, and it'd be a habit it introduce herself as that. But she'd be Weasley on paper.

There's no offence, I like when people point out my mistakes, too, then I know where to fix it. :)

Thank you so much for leaving a review!


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