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Review:megthechef43 says:
Sam,

Great chapter. I wonder what happened between Ron and Hermione to cause a spilt. I like that Theo's son's name is Lex. My first thought was Lex Luthor, but that is because I'm a bit of a Smallville nut. Haha. I wonder how Hugo found Adam's shop. That is a crazy/great connection between the two. I like this chapter but one part stood out because I'm not sure what you were trying to say. This

"But it wasn't the money that him ignore the dream and take the case; it was the newly formed tears that fell down her cheeks as she noticed the picture of his son on the desk."

Maybe you are missing "had" before him. I don't know.

I'll be reading on...

Meg

Author's Response: Hey!

It was a mutual thing, they just fell out of love. Lex Luthor is eveyone's first thought, both in real life and in HP, which is awesome. :D

He found it through Harry, who heard of it from - dun, dun, duuun - Theo :{

Yes, I did. Thank you.

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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