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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
Hi, I'm here for the review battle!

I was originally intending to read just the first chapter, but I was so hooked by your writing (and the shocking end to that chapter!) that I had to continue on.

Despite the fact that people were injured, I thought that the geese at the Halloween feast were quite funny. That scene provides a nice counterweight to the heavy content in the first two chapters.

I haven't read any other new gen stories that portray Albus as a completely evil character, so I can't help wondering whether some secret will eventually be revealed that exonerates him. That alone is enough to make me curious to read more. :)

I'm also intrigued by the brother-vs-brother plot line, it's a fresh take on the Slytherin vs Gryffindor conflict, and I like it.

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