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Review:adluvshp says:
Wow. This was just brilliant. I envy your writing Annie!

Honestly speaking, I didn't understand this right away and I was even confused enough to re-read the first two paragraphs twice. But after that, it started making more sense and I simply lost myself in the beauty of your writing. The ending of course tied everything together and all of it fell into place with a resounding click in my mind xP

I really loved your writing style. The way you managed to balance the use of "you", "I", and "she" was very well done. I can never attempt it because I am scared of confusing myself as well as the reader, so I applaud you for attempting it and doing it so well. I admit I got confused in the beginning but it was all fine as I continued reading, so good job. I also enjoyed your use of the short sentences. Sometimes, they can disrupt the flow of writing but here it was all done very well - they even matched the theme of the one-shot.

I liked your portrayal of Draco, and the comparisons he made between his wife and Pansy. I also felt a little sad for him as he wondered about how things would be (sort of) if he was marrying Pansy and not the OC, and if Pansy was not almost in love with the other man (that was what happened right).

Your imagery was simply amazing by the way. I was totally engrossed while reading. I could visualize Pansy as this delicate flower (which is something) and all that, and it was just mind-blowing. I was really lost in all your words and descriptions, and that is all I have to say =)

This was over all a great piece of writing. It had a very smooth flow, with beautiful imagery, awesome descriptions, and amazing theme and writing style.

10/10

Cheers!
Angie
(AditiDraco95)

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