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Review:ines0803 says:
Hi again!
Seriously, everything happens to you. I can't imagine how I would react if I lost everything I have on my computer, even though I save some things - specially photos and videos - on a hard disk. Have you also lost any story you wrote (and haven't publish yet)?
McFarland is a creep, but I guess there's always one everywhere. It was sweet to see Jack become so protective :) I believe you when you say that he is good, but I still think that there's something off with him and that he's hiding something (maybe from his past?)
My favorite part in this chapter:
"He grabbed my hand and yanked me after him, barely able to keep up with his ridiculously long legs as he jumped down the steps three at a time and my bag slammed into my back, nearly toppling me over but his grip steadied me and YAY for Quidditch practice this was why I kept it up and oh, shit, didnít mean to terrify first years on top missing the train and was that Roxy? Might have been, never mind, heís still got my hand and weíre still running - why are we running?"
I loved to read her thoughts!
Great chapter! I'm looking forward for the next one!
Ines

Author's Response: Heya!
Certainly feels that way sometimes, but... yeah. Everyone suffers- I'm not alone. And that is what I'm doing from now on- it's a bit late, but better than never :) No, all my documents are safe- none of my stories have gone- it was just the pictures folder.
Good ole McFarland- destroying the reputation of boys everywhere. He was adorable, wasn't he? Bless >.< WHAT COULD HE POSSIBLY HIDE? (everything, I suppose, because he barely talks about him, but still). ;) Okay, so I'll tell you the truth. He's secretly a vampire. Edward Cullen bit him.
(...wait, is that the right fandom?)
XD I had fun writing that, although I sorta hold my breath when I thought track like that because I type at breakneck speed and fainting while I'm typing? Not good. So yeah. Not often. :D
In summery: I like that bit too.
The next one is gonna be awesome.
Thank you for taking your time to review again. I love reading them it all.
Ginger


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