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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hello there!

I love reading about the Marauders and Peter's description in this story was spot on! It shows his transition from an innocent schoolboy to a cold heart killer and the motives you've underlined for the betrayal feel so real that it's just chilling.

The moment when you described the cruel smile that passed his lips it was so obvious that even though he may have been scared half to death and some part of him hoped to save his friends, he also enjoyed the power that the Dark Lord gave him and the fact that this power was not shared with any of the others.

The meeting between him and Voldemort was very well written. You manged to write Voldemort very true to canon and the dialogue, as well as the whole initiation process felt very real.

Good job on this!

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for your review! I'm really pleased you thought I did Peter justice! It is such an emotional piece for me because it's that moment of no return for him. That moment where he takes one step too far and he can't go back. He's not strong enough, not that he'd want to at this point either.

Yah, i think although he was loyal to his friends and was part of them, i think eventually the war started changing things for him. His childhood dreams and his idealism was squished out of him which the others held onto. But he didn't have that anymore so he turned into this and eventually into the monster we know him as.

I'm really happy to hear that you thought the meeting between them went well. I was a little nervous about writing Voldemort because he's such an evil character and i wasn't sure if i could give him justice. i'm glad that you were able to see him as being true to canon in that brief moment. He's an interesting character though to write, to get his evil across and yet his charm that made people follow him so loyally.

Thank you so much for your thoughts!!


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