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Review:Courtney Dark says:
This was a short, but very lovely start to your story. It was very light and easy to read, which is always nice, and definitely made me want to read on.

I like the way you introduced your OC, with the fact that she is afraid of commitment and that all her dates have been meaningless...that definitely adds a nice dynamic to the story and the line: 'Until I met him' fit perfectly!

You switched tenses quite a bit in this chapter, but it wasn't too disrupting. The scene between Lydia and James was short and sweet...and the slight cliffhanger at the end was a great way to end this chapter.

Nice job! I also apologize for this probably completely unhelpful review.

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It totally was helpful, don't worry! :)

Camille


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