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Review:TheMarauderChick says:
Hi! I'm back again :)

(One quick thing before I start. It took me a while to realise it was in James' POV so maybe you want to mention it shortly at the beginning? IDK, it might just be me being picky :P )

Flashback! I love flashbacks because you learn more of a character's history :D (wait, would this even be considered one? meh) Oh Jimmy, you charmer you ;) Wow, I was not expecting him to have had feelings for Amelie before Amelie had discovered hers for him. (because honestly, guys can be a bit daft when it comes to those things haha)

I really like Amelie's character, she is so cool! I love her strong, independent, booyah girl power attitude. And she's feisty. I like feisty. RAWR.

And oh god, what have you gotten yourself into Jimmy boy? I feel like the last word pretty much sums up his life haha.

Now onto some serious stuff (kind of. I mean, since when am I serious?)

I like that this is in James' POV. I personally think that it is very difficult to write in a guy's pov, so kudos to you! I especially like the thought process in the end. So funny!

-Sankavi ^_^

Author's Response: Hello!

That's a good point - but usually I try and steer away from the '~***___JAMES' POINT OF VIEW_**~' kind of stuff because it ruins the flow of the story. I also don't really like saying 'Hi my name's James and this is blah blah' in first person POV because I think it feels strains... and with my way, it keeps people guessing ;)

And no and yes, I suppose - it's not really a flashback because the story jumps around in terms of chapters and time, but then it also is because it's different to the present day (whatever that is in this story).

N'awww I like feisty too!

Thank you so much for reviewing! :D

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