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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hello! I'm finally here for the first of your reviews! Thank you, once again, for entering my challenge! Reading your entry made me so happy (which is kind of weird, as your entry was so sad...but anyway. Onto the story at hand.)

I wasn't quite sure what to expect when I started reading this, but the banner was amazing and the title inspiring so I decided to give it a go. And boy, am I glad I did! I don't think I've ever read anything like this before, but the first thing I noticed was that I loved the dynamics between the members of the Weasley family. I have to say, I especially loved Harry! I don't know what it was, but you just wrote him so...perfectly, in a slightly humourous way. I was just imagining Harry, dealing with all the kids and probably stressing out just a little bit.

I love Scorpius, and your characterization of him was great. I also liked the initial antagonism between he and Rose. Though they didn't exactly like each other, they weren't full out insulting each other of fighting, so I think you created a nice balance. And I really liked their scene in the middle of the woofs together...for some reason it kind of reminded me of Bridge to Terabithia, even though it's been years since I saw that movie! And the waterfall scene seemed so tranquil.

Ron is DEAD!!! What??? Even the thought of it breaks my heart. Poor Hermione! Poor Harry! Poor Rose and Hugo! Although, I have to admit, it kinda makes sense - gives reason for Rose acting the way she was, at the beginning. And I like the fact that Scorpius helped her to get past it.

I think this was a great one-shot - and I giggled when I read your authors note. Very nice!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, I am so glad you liked it! Yeah, I killed Ron, come at me JKR! :P

Camille


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