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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Ooooh, there was a lot I liked about this chapter! In fact, it was probably my favourite yet!

I really liked everything that Neville - ahem, sorry, Professor Longbottom - said to Flick. It was all very sweet, compassionate and considerate and just so Neville! And I'm glad that Flick gets to see her children more often than just during the holidays. It definitely would be very hard being away from them, and I hope we get to see this in some of your later chapters.

Hehehe, I giggled a bit at all the theories of how Flick had died. They were certainly all very imaginative. I'm guessing you had a great time coming up with them all. I think my personal favourite definitely had to be Dom's theory. She's such a great character!

Ohmygoodness, when Al said: "There was the one where you got knocked up by me, left Hogwarts and never told me that I have two children" I almost had a heart attack! And then I read the next line and I let out a BIG sigh of relief. I want the truth to get out, but definitely not in that way.

God, I really do love Dom and the weird and strange things that she says. I like the fact that she and Flick were ganging up against Hattie without being complete...witches and I also laughed when she, Flick and their other friends gave each other the look when Hattie came out in the chemise. I really do not like Hattie. I wonder if she'll prove to have any redeemable qualities or whether she'd just a robot...hmm.

Anyway, great chapter! Good job.


Author's Response: Hello again :D
I love this chapter as well and along with chapter ten and another certain chapter it is one of my all time favourites!!!

Neville is a sweetie even as a professor. Whats not to love about Neville :) The allowing Flick to see them by flooing home does come into play sometime before chapter 20 and after chapter 12/13. I think it would be especially hard for Flick because Bentley and Aubri are so young and she knows she'll be missing their milestones like walking and talking etc..

I have to say Dom's theory was my favourite and I had a great time coming up with them, since I tend to have an overactive imagination.

Haha, it would have been a little cruel for the truth to come out like that but you never know how things will play out. ;)

Dom... I think after Flick and Ria she is my favourite person to write because she's wild, unpredictable and you neevr know what she'll come out with or do next.

I'm not a fan of Hattie either but she is fun to write since her personality and the ways she acts is so different to the others.

Thank you once again for reading and reviewing!!

Soph x

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